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July Meeting; this Tuesday 6July, 7pm - 9pm

It's our last meeting before the summer break and we'll be critting Andy's short film screenplay 'Sweet Dreams' - if you're a member, the script is already in the members section of DerbyshireScriptwriters.com . If you're interested in coming along, drop us an email: joinus@derbyshirescriptwriters.com or call in and see us on Tuesday at Derby Library's meeting room on The Strand - see how to get there on this post .

Act One, Scene One...

First post. Hmm. For me, there's a strange commitment to the first words on the page; and the notion of changing them, or deleting them, or ignoring them completely in the future feels a bit like an act of betrayal to the story idea you first had. Of course by the time you reach the end, it's likely they're not the right first words any more. You've spent more time with the characters in the story; they're doing things you didn't expect they'd do at the start. In fact, the story might need to start from somewhere else entirely. It's a point that regularly comes up when members' scripts are reviewed in Derbyshire Scriptwriters' monthly crit sessions; and it's fantastic to see how the group's thoughts can help give you a fresh point of view on what really counts - getting your script to tell the heart of your story. So, here comes our next first post; if you feel something's missing, just wait 'til you see the rewrite...